Feedback For First Rough Cut

As a class we have all viewed each others rough cuts and given each group feedback on their work. This will allow each group to receive outside ideas and receive different ideas on how to improve and what about your work that people enjoyed.


Here is the feedback received from other groups:


Armadillo:

Positives:

• Pictures are good/ unique and help to explain he story well.
• Can imagine the voice over being very good/ fitting well.
• Music is good and fits well with the piece.

Things that can be improved:

• Feels more like an episode opening then a trailer.
• Titles, Channels and Times missing.
• Rearrange to make the meaning clearer.

Piglet:

Positives:

• Great idea- relates to young people of our age.
• Pictures are good- like hangover- Day to night good too.
• Actors are good, believable characters
• Different to all other groups.

Things that can be improved:

• Sounds all different and levels (Wind for example)
• Are the songs allowed?
• None continuous
• Add text to make is easier to follow

Panda:

Positive:

• It has different content
• Good use of lighting

Things that could be improved:

• Need to look at the sounds being continuous.

From this feedback we have been able to work out what issues we need to change in our second rough cut.

What we will change:
From this feedback we have realised that the meaning isn't clear throughout our piece and we will have to rearrange scenes and characters to make the meaning more apparent.


Will Howlett